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Rewriting the Sentinels 1-10

It was bound to happen.

I look toward only the positives in a situation like what happened and I see this as a big opportunity to finally go back and revise alot of the mistakes I feel I made during the writing of the first 10 Sentinels chapters.

There was a lot of characterization and plot error that I feel shoulda been done much better and I honestly feel a bit of the plot went loopy or nowhere at times. SO it's time to put Tonya on another ride.


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