Rewriting the Sentinels 1-10

It was bound to happen.

I look toward only the positives in a situation like what happened and I see this as a big opportunity to finally go back and revise alot of the mistakes I feel I made during the writing of the first 10 Sentinels chapters.

There was a lot of characterization and plot error that I feel shoulda been done much better and I honestly feel a bit of the plot went loopy or nowhere at times. SO it's time to put Tonya on another ride.

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Dreadskull #1 - The Heist

I've been Challenged!!

I never thought I would actually see the day someone wanted to go head to head with me in writing. My friend wants to race to create a Manga first. I've never done a manga nor Manga art but I've been training up my art and I say I'm up to the challenge. So in addition to Shuja, you'll also see pages from a Manga I'll be putting together. Mind, this is a massive leap for me so mistakes are bound to happen. For me though it's a perfect writing and drawing exercise, I can use it to keep my skills sharp. The series will be called Vain and it's about a cocky Vampire lord who oversteps his bounds a bit. I have no planning going into this and it's a play it by ear thing. I wanna see how I can perform in a week to week setting. Here are some scratch shots I sketched up in 10 mins or less The Protagonist, Vayne Intended First Cover Vayne has some ... weird... abilities

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