The direction of the new Volume 1

As you know, due to some bizarre glitch The Sentinels 1-6 were wiped out and I have to write it all over again. Which is actually great so I thought I'd just explain where I'm going with the rewrite.

Chapters 1-3 will be through the eyes of Tonya and Tonya only:

Sans the chapter where we meet Nicholas I feel that some consistency is well deserved and the constant breaking from Tonya as a character wasn't needed.

The Rufio encounter:

Yea, this in my opinion was one of the weakest points of the early chapters. It'll be rewritten in a better way.

Better character interaction:

Some of the characters, acted well, out of character. I didn't much care for that.

Alot of these mistakes I made is because I was trying to go through this as I go. But as I began learning more and reading more I realized that winging it isn't the way to go. So with a mind more focused planning and crafting the story I'll give a much more quality read.

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