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The direction of the new Volume 1

As you know, due to some bizarre glitch The Sentinels 1-6 were wiped out and I have to write it all over again. Which is actually great so I thought I'd just explain where I'm going with the rewrite. Chapters 1-3 will be through the eyes of Tonya and Tonya only: Sans the chapter where we meet Nicholas I feel that some consistency is well deserved and the constant breaking from Tonya as a character wasn't needed. The Rufio encounter: Yea, this in my opinion was one of the weakest points of the early chapters. It'll be rewritten in a better way. Better character interaction: Some of the characters, acted well, out of character. I didn't much care for that. Alot of these mistakes I made is because I was trying to go through this as I go. But as I began learning more and reading more I realized that winging it isn't the way to go. So with a mind more focused planning and crafting the story I'll give a much more quality read.

Rewriting the Sentinels 1-10

It was bound to happen. I look toward only the positives in a situation like what happened and I see this as a big opportunity to finally go back and revise alot of the mistakes I feel I made during the writing of the first 10 Sentinels chapters. There was a lot of characterization and plot error that I feel shoulda been done much better and I honestly feel a bit of the plot went loopy or nowhere at times. SO it's time to put Tonya on another ride.