The Grim Library

As you know, due to some bizarre glitch The Sentinels 1-6 were wiped out and I have to write it all over again. Which is actually great so I thought I'd just explain where I'm going with the rewrite. Chapters 1-3 will be through the eyes of Tonya and Tonya only: Sans the chapter where we meet Nicholas I feel that some consistency is well deserved and the constant breaking from Tonya as a character wasn't needed. The Rufio encounter: Yea, this in my opinion was one of the weakest points of the early chapters. It'll be rewritten in a better way. Better character interaction: Some of the characters, acted well, out of character. I didn't much care for that. Alot of these mistakes I made is because I was trying to go through this as I go. But as I began learning more and reading more I realized that winging it isn't the way to go. So with a mind more focused planning and crafting the story I'll give a much more quality read.

It was bound to happen. I look toward only the positives in a situation like what happened and I see this as a big opportunity to finally go back and revise alot of the mistakes I feel I made during the writing of the first 10 Sentinels chapters. There was a lot of characterization and plot error that I feel shoulda been done much better and I honestly feel a bit of the plot went loopy or nowhere at times. SO it's time to put Tonya on another ride.

Just to remind you guys that I have not forgotten about the series here's a preview of what goes down in the next chapter! ________________________________________________________________________________ Tonya’s ride home was full of discontent. Raymond tried cheering her up the only way he knew how: being ironically unfunny, but it didn’t work. She kept silent for the entire ride, her mind lost in deep thought. The situation was getting out of her control, she didn’t like that. The car came to a complete stop at the outside of her neighborhood.  She looked up to a horrible sight. Several large pitch-black pillar of smoke arising through the sky and heat she could feel through the insulated car. Each and every stark white house now doused in raging hues of orange, yellow and deep red and they were torn asunder. Lawns once green and tendered engulfed completely in raging flames. Even a couple street lamps had fallen over and fire hydrants had burst ironically to no effec...

For those of you who enjoyed what I had put up so far. Sorry? I'm not even sure what the hell happened. Most of what I had written is GONE. I don't understand it, I haven't touched the blog at all since I've been writing. I could break down write now, but I guess I should take this as an opportunity to clean up the storylines and maybe even restart! With Volume 2 coming I wanted to address everything I felt I lacked on. It hurts having that much work just vanish out of nowhere, that'll teach me to back up offline If there's anything to take from this. Either way I'm very upset, but this isn't the first time something like this has happened. Many years ago I've had it happen to many projects I was designing and then my brother deleted them off of his computer. I at the time was pretty much banned from computers so I used my brother's while he was away. I had broken one of his rules and he deleted my hard work, a couple years worth of work actu...

I've taken the liberty to slim down the site a bit and give it a less cluttered feel guys! Now the stories should be much easier to access with the new Archive pages! Take a look around!

I'm very happy with how far my blog has come along and how many people have followed along to read what I write, it means a lot to me. That being said I want to make sure that I have the quality to keep the story going so what I'm taking is a break to write a bunch and have my consultants inputs and help me edit better. In the mean time I will be on Tumblr and Google +

Holed up in a small hotel room, the Dreadskull pirates were hard at work to plan an impromptu heist. Supplies were low at best and there wasn't much money to buy any, barely enough to afford the room they gathered in. Izzy's ship wasn't much of a great ride either that guzzled gas and Corvo ate at least twice as much as the average man. So with the crew being low on ammo, fuel, and food, this heist had to work out. Tori could wait for a while. "Izzy, you had a good look at the ship, right?" Slig asked. "For the most part, yeah. Thing's a big black juggernaut compared to our ship. But modesty has always been my thi-" "Hold on why's it gotta be a 'black juggernaut' what's that mean?" "I mean it's black! What color did you want me to say?" "We can see it's black, you ain't have to point it out." "Are you feeling some type of way?" "Both of you, shut the hell up."...